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Hello

Hello

I feel…
Dead.
Is this Insanity?
Hello?
Are you there?

I feel…
Suppressed.
Is this Normal?
Hello?
Is anyone there?

Hello.

Calling out your name,
Wishing you would answer.
Once more, once more,
Hello once more.
Asking for you in this place,
I am just an outsider.
Once more, once more,
I am alone.
Because of you,
Hello once more.

Hello.

I feel…
Alone.
Is this Company?
Hello?
Can you hear me?

I feel…
Pain.
Is this Comfort?
Hello?
Can anyone hear me?

Hello.

Calling out your name,
Wishing you would answer.
Once more, once more,
Hello once more.
Asking for you in this place,
I am just an outsider.
Once more, once more,
I am alone.
Because of you,
Hello once more.

Unwanted…
Unneeded…
To Feel you once more!
Hello!
To want you by my side!
Hello!
Unwanted…
Unneeded…
To Feel you once more!
To want you, want you…
Hello…
Hello…

Hello.

Calling out your name,
Wishing you would answer.
Once more, once more,
Hello once more.
Asking for you in this place,
I am just an outsider.
Once more, once more,
I am alone.
Because of you,
Hello once more.

Hello.

Author notes

hehe... instead of writing essay for fruitcake, i write crap like this! ^^
Written November 11th, 2005

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  • Nobodys Baby
    December 7, 2005
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    omg this isn't crap!!! it's fantastic
    i luv everything about this poem ... there is't one thing wrong about it
    i luv how u keep repeating "hello"
    gr8 write ... keep up the excellent wrk
    -hessa


  • Irish Rain
    December 6, 2005
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    Who'd want to do an essay for her, anyway, eh Ri-chan! Love it, luv, just like all your poems!


  • Master-Mush
    November 26, 2005
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    crap? no... i like! bside... hoo ever heard of ri doin hw? lol

    keep up the good work... and mayb try to fit in a few mins of hw... lol

    luv my oneechan! and miss u...!!!!!!

    mushy