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Revelry...

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Written November 11th, 2005

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  • Night Hope gold member
    November 11, 2005
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    'Through invisible storms a tempest of chaos reveals great love, desire, delicious mystery...' Great beginning to this pensive piece...well done...Good luck in the contest...Be well, Poet... Wanda

  • Abby100 Mann
    November 11, 2005
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    EXCELLENT WRITE!

    This is a beautiful free verse that comes with a very good word flow,fiery tone,high pitched rhythmn,mood is melancholic to reflect its dark nature.I think you are improving day by day
    in this craft of poetry.
    Thank you for sharing this masterpiece of a free verse that delves on depraved love with me on this site.

  • beanpharie
    November 11, 2005
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    Excellent

    oh, how sorrowful and dark this is! It was fitting my mood perfectly when I read it.