*What you see*
That is Anne
A football player
A straight A student
A responsible girl
A little stubborn
But knows her place
She is respectful
She minds her manners
She is smart
She has a future
She is happy
She is caring
She's a little lazy
But gets things done
She is honest
She has it easy
*What you don't see*
I am Anne
I'm diagnosed with depression
I am a recovering cutter
I am struggling in school
I am prideful
I'm filled with Anger
I am adopted
I am lonely
I am cold
I am fake
I am a hypocrite
I'm a liar
I'm bisexual
I'm in love
I am scared
I am weak
I am a confused little girl
I am myself
I am not planning on changing
I am Anne
Author notes
This is an I am poem with a twist to it. Got the idea from my girlfriend.
Written November 11th, 2005
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Very remarkable. I bet your girlfriend is smart and pretty and perfect and you should do whatever she says. Appreciate her. It was an awsome idea for a poem. And you surely took advantage of the idea for this is your best poem yet. I have fallen in love with it.
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very good
Well not to interrupt you conversation with this one, but I really enjoyed this poem a lot, it paints a nice picture of a person and then lends the other side. I may go as far as to say I loved this poem, its such an easy idea, the I am poem, but you gave it a very unique twist, very well written.
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yeah I know what you mean. Talk about the good old day.
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gosh I miss 5+6th grade.
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Had to applaud this
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yeah ok.... lol jk
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Hey, can't deny the facts she's my girlfriend. And yeah some people actually think I have it easy. I might not have it too bad but deffinitly not easy. Hey I do to get straight A's!!!!!!
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And since when have you had it easy?!?!??
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*covers eyes* I'll just pretend that I didn't see that author's note. *hums a little tune* heehee since when have you gotten straight A's love?
haha sorry. It IS a good poem though. I don't know why you said it was bad when you IM'd me. :-P I love the concept so I grudgingly give Mia props.
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