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Let me Pretend

Just lie
I'll never no the difference
Break my heart as much as
you please
It's yours
And it's not ready to leave you
Let me hear the lies
So I can pretend
you care
for just a moments time
do not leave me empty
with death upon my mind
Leave me full of something
even if its pain

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Written November 11th, 2005

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  • submerged
    December 30, 2005
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    thanks


  • CapturedMoon
    December 30, 2005
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    This poem is so incredible. I am amazed by your talent.


  • HunteroftheDusk
    November 11, 2005
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    God this poem rocks. Even though it's sad and heart-breaking. the lines I love the most were:
    "Break my heart as much as
    you please
    It's yours"

    It's funny because thats the way I'm always scared I'll end up, and god I'd hate that. But yeah the poem is alsome. Keep it up Tina.

    Edited on Nov 11, 4:23 p.m. because 'Cuz I said so'.


  • Lucky429
    November 11, 2005
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    Once again excellent work. Once again it makes me think of Him. Or maybe everything does. I especially love the lines: "Let me hear the lies|So I can pretend|you care|for just a moments time" I also like how the person in the poem is deperate for any kind of feeling/interaction with the one that they crave, even if it hurts them