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But I'm Still Here (not done yet)

i wish there was something
i could do to turn back
the hands of time.
I'd erase all the pain i caused
i'd erase all the tears i've shed.
All the times i'd been hurt
and all the pain i'd endured.
I'm so lost and confused
with nothing to set me straight.
I've cried so many tears
after only 15 years.
I wander through life
with only blind eyes.
my parents act like they hate me
and i have nothing to live for.
Except for you.
I'm still here
Because of you.
I still smile
Because of you.
My tears are few
Because of you.
There's one thing i wouldn't change
And that's having you in my life.
I'm still here
With you.

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Written November 11th, 2005

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  • Murph-Sa
    October 29, 2007

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    Well...at least your parents only act like they hate you mine do and sometimes they disown me......It's actually pretty funny

  • Dymond
    November 25, 2005
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    I agree with madmaid...although all your poems are good this one is one of your better ones.

  • madmaid692000
    November 15, 2005
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    that is a really good poem i like it alot well i like most of your work but this one is really good..
    sarah