DANCING FIERCELY
Ballet shoes on her feet
Hoping, she can race the heat
Flying through the night air
There goes the first pair
Her feet start to move
Her body feels the groove
Dancing wildly, she starts to sway
As she smiles, everything is okay
Her dress swirls,
As she twirls
Her last step, she goes slow
Over and under, she stays low
Through the sun, she dances fierce
The silence, she will pierce
Her last step, she will take
Ends with her first big break
Author notes
number 3
A contest entry
- Options and Options and Guess What More Options! by neoladyem.
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What did you think
Comments
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This is cool. The rhyme is nice, and it really paints a picture in my head. Good job, and best of luck!
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I liked the flow and dream-likeness of this piece. I do request that you add your Author's Name in your Author's Notes. Best of luck
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This is lovely and almost dream like in a way. The poem is flowing like a breeze. It was a really joy.
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Very Nice!
I like this piece
Hehe it is so. . .So Ebulient! Wonderful! Hmm, it made me smile BIG as I read it, thank you for that 
Simple, unpretencious, straight-forward, just what I like(sometimes anyway hehe)Good show.
-Yours Truly,
Evan Alexie
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