If I lose you again then my soul will pass
Into the land of the dead
Of tears a mass
And never another thought in my head
Breath would never escape my lungs
And words would never be heard from our tongues
Again
Never another reunion until
You're cast from Heaven and I am from Hell
When you break us apart then I will see red
And fall to the land of Nod
Dripping from my head
And reaping myself for being a fraud
My heart would make a wrongful beat
Then stop before it's accused of deceit
Again
Author notes
I wrote this just before the untitled poem I've just posted. Also, I had been crying about how my boyfriend has left me so many times before, and that I'm afraid he'll do it again.
Last time I nearly killed myself (but I'm too scared), so this is what came out of it...
I hope you like it.
Written November 11th, 2005
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Excellent! Really paints a very visual and emotional picture. Keep it up. -
oh hun, what a beautiful poem. I'm sorry to hear about you and your boyfriend. I REALLY hope all works out well between the two of you. I'd say talk to him and find out why everythings "messed up" im sure its not messed up but i mean why is everything not working out between the two of you? I know that i would like to know why i kept fighting or breaking up with my boyfriend. I dont know if that will help you at all, but im sorry to hear about you two.
lovely poem, it really shows your anger and saddness. I think it really is beautiful in it own way. Its beautifully written and seems like it came right from your heart. Thats the best poetry - poetry that comes from the heart. its just so beautiful and pure. Beautiful job with this, really. I hope all is well or all WILL BE well with you and your boyfriend. I pray the best for you two. no matter what that may be - if its best you two are apart, then i pray that you wont be to sad and get up the courage to really kill yourself. and if you two are meant to stay together, i pray it will work out in the end! I love you hun and dont give up on life. ♥
beautiful poem - thank you for sharing it.
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i like the poem althoug hte ryhming scheme confused me at first I thought it was trying to ryhme with a slightly off meter then it didn't then it did again.... i was confused. I'm sorry to hear about your boyfriend, I'd get rid if I were you.
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Hey don't try and kill yourself because your are afraid that your boyfriend will leave you...love is important but life should be cherished, you should not let love destroy your life.
Do you know why your boyfriend left you before?If you know then you should try and see what is the problem between the two of you.Is your relationship strong and good?because if it isnt then there is no use in keeping a relationship like that.
You should be happy and loved ...
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oh how sad im sorry deary *huggies*
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