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Please Don't leave

You'll always be imperfect perfection
You'll never be a wrongful reflection
You'll always do your clueless deception
To me...







For my love eternal
Kim
From his ever faithful
Maja

Author notes

I wrote this last night after crying for too long. About how he keeps leaving and how I'm afraid he'll do it again soon. I have dreamt about him leaving. I hate that.

(11/30 - 2005: He left.)

Hope you find it as sweet as it was meant.
Written November 11th, 2005

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  • Smores Girl89
    May 16, 2007

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    i went through that with my x a year and a half ago.. even though i had already told him that first time he left that it was over, he kept coming back and leaving again right up until just last october (i think it was october..). my last communication with him was a text back in january. i think he's gone for good now. anyway, beautiful write. sometimes it's just simplicty that packs the most emotion and meaning. i also think that title fits perfectly. it was a good suggestion and i'm glad you used it. wonderful piece, dear friend

    ~m~


  • ThisIsMyWonderland
    December 11, 2005
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    Short but beautiful!! How about a smiple title like "please dont leave" im not really the best at titles (as you can see) but I think this is a wonderful write!!