What are you going to do?
Are you going to get your head on strait?
Or be a failure your whole life
and let what every one said be true?
You know what you want to do,
but instead you don't do what you need to.
You do nothing but live your life from day to day,
and hope and pray that everything goes your way.
When it doesn't you throw a fit and try to take your life
for something you did.
So wake up and look around
your not the only one who's feeling down.
You might not be on stable ground,
but your not the only one going around like this.
So look into the future and tell me what you see,
cause i see a girl who's wanting to be free,
but remember to be free you have look up and see,
what it is you truly want to be.
Don't look down
cause when you do you'll no longer be on ground.
You'll be in the sky.
Doing what you always wanted to do...
FLY.
Author notes
ummm...this pretty much tells all...but right now i'm not doing good...my grades have fallin...me and my mom don't get along...i do work and i love it but i think i'm about to lose my job...i have a great boyfriend that i love and everything is going good with him...i also have a girlfriend and everything is going good with her...but some how i still feel like a piece of s***...but i'm trying to get everything in place and it's working little by little...thanks to everything i found out about myself...
Written November 10th, 2005
A contest entry
- ~*Reflections*~ by OurxBeginning.
500 points, ended November 14, 2005, 24 entries
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nice poem and nice work by using the sky
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Excellent write. Enjoyed reading this very much. I could sence the emotion that you put into this. And I hope everything gets better for you. Thank you for sharing such wonderful work and keep up the excellent writes.
**Ktulu Blackwolfe** -
i thank you for the comment...and i know...i believe more in myself than i ever have now...and i'm hoping everything will turn out right...hopefully...thanks again...Anna
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SUPER EMOTION! and you know what, always believe in yourself and
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amazing write hun!! i totally got it all and know how u feel....keep it up ok?? w/love-Jana-
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thank you for the comment...i don't even know what to say...i love everything you write...and you comment on as much as you can of mine...it helps me a lot...everyone here on allpoetry has inspired me in some why or another...but you and a few others have been here since my first poem on the first name i had on here...even if it wasn't that long ago you guys have helped...Anna
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I loved this
Totally a style all your own great job ~Lots of Love~ Lady Eclipse
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I love it. It's very..waht is that...uh...mind boggeling. Yea. That's it. I really love the quetions, and the way you made those statements, ans ended with a command.
Love it
Love you.
<3 Tawni -
thank you...i sorta made it up right on the spot and didn't know what i was doing til after i got done writing it...i did have a different begnning but i didn't like it...lol...thank you for the comment...Anna
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This is good, and I can totally relate to this. It holds a lot of emotion and meaning. Good job, and thanks for entering.
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lmao...that was great...i can't wait to meet him...lol...thanks for the comment...Anna
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thank you for your comment...and eventually i will be flying above the clouds...Anna
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peter pan says: welcome to my life flying around. Interestng poem nice rhyming. -
This is a wonderful piece of writing! Great self exploration. Fly irl, I know you can! Be the angel you are and soar above those clouds! Much love,
Demonic Mistress aka. Maria. xxx
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