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Can She All

As she walks up the streets
There is a moonlight that must exist
She applies her darker mascara
And she never deprives the passion
The moonrises to foreclose
I can see that she is alone
Her trust is broken into shards
As I wanna touch her tonight
What else in this world can I add or say
She was never the type who loves in any way

(chorus)
Her soul is lost in this bloodshot moonlight
Her moist kiss glitters for all silhouettes
Her body is burning high in her own desires
And I will show her tonight a greater lover

As she struts down the alley
There is a night that will forever arrive
She percieves the shadow
And she never gives her care
The nocturnal frees her
I can feel that she wants me
Her agility is granted to
As I wanna love her tonight
What else lies within this alien of a nation
She wants to redefine her own little creation

(repeat chorus)

As she runs out of love
There is a dusk that will continue in dawn
She fervors within all
And she never is gilded
The forever is tied to her
I can taste that she is beautiful
Her aroma glows in the moonlight
As I wanna embrace her tonight
What else can be dealt in scarlet passion
She concieves her mascara to a new fashion

(repeat chorus twice)

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Written November 10th, 2005

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  • Shancy Fayre
    November 10, 2005
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    A good job.

    Yea, this would be great but you have misspelled words in several places that detract attention from your poem. I like
    the way your words were gentle about the lady. Good job. Shancy.