Bed of roses lain
with fallen tears and remains
of the forgotten
Author notes
senyru
Written November 10th, 2005
In a list
What did you think
Comments
1 - 5 of 5
-
perfection comes in various forms..this one lays close to my heart
-
Bravo!
-
great
says so much in so little words...good write... -
Bunny is right, the image that this paints is exquistely sad and perfectly done. We should never allow ourselves to forget the happiness...
-
Oh .. THIS is good!
It's pretty hard to write a truly bad senyru .. but it's equally bad to write a truly GOOD one .. but you've managed. This is .. really, the epitome of senyru, and that might sound like pretty extravagant praise, but it just painted a perfect image in my head .. beyond words.
Well done!
Adding your comment:
1 - 5 of 5
6 old applause
