Farewell
experience,
as innocence resides
hidden within the eyes of blue
the truth.
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cinquain
Written November 10th, 2005
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There is a lot of depth to this. Very nice cinquain.
Sam
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So very few words and yet so very much meaning. This is fabulous.
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There are a lot of wonderful Cinquains in this contest and yours fit right up there with the rest, As Samplette said this is not going to be an easy judging in this contest. What I like most is the Title makes you think it gives the poem away but yet you say it in such a unique way it is a pleasant surprise after you read it.
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A very deep meaningful cinquain.
Best wishes in the contest. Awesome poem
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Another wonderful cinquain. I think this will not be an easy one for her to judge..I held three of these last night, and this contests surpasses them already with the amount of entries and explosive talent...she has her job cut out for her..best wishes to you in the contest.
Sam
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