The spoken word
Is absurd, yet
Unheard of here
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Written on 10th November 2005 at 20:00 GMT
Hmm...
Than-bauk
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- Three Lines Of Wonder by poets whisper.
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Yeah, it's a Than-bauk. Three lines of four syllables each. The last syllable of the first line rhymes with the third syllable of the second line, and the second syllable of the last line.
They're very nice to work with, you try some! 
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This piece makes me wonder. Four syllables for each line...is there some type of form here? LOL! This piece reminds me of the old times(in my history book) where if you spoke something that was against society...it was unheard of and there would be punishment...but I am guessing that there is a hidden meaning here. My thoughts are too shallow right now, for I can barely concentrate on my homework. Maybe I will understand then. Good job though! So few words can create such a great piece.
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wow...i've never read anything this short before. it catches my eye..and i love it. it's so different that it makes it outstanding! good job!
babybug121 -
It is all so different when it is spoken, isn't it? Wonderfully done!
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