You stand with pride and might, as others look at you like a god and you just want to be noticed as one of them. Your talents exceed all the limits. I wish the best for you in the future with all the praise, I remember the day it all began. I handed you the weapon of choice and you slashed threw life with it. Only getting better to match your inspiratisional leaders.
You Smash, Slash, and make others hearts melt.
When you wake up and realized that your not the same, you will be then even more mightier and more powerful. The words you speak and write, doesn't even compare to life. You blow our minds with your words, and thoughts. Something just so simple to you, but so powerful to someone else. So let the music flow threw your golden finger tips. Inspire others how you have inspired me, to learn to play, and to write these words. So allow the world to bow down to you. Give us one more killer shred, and let the world speak the truth.
Author notes
This is a poem I wrote about my cousin who has inspired me to do many things in life. As I have hopefully returned the favor in the same way.
Written November 9th, 2005
A contest entry
- This Ones Just For You by Sandygram.
300 points, ended November 10, 2005, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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hey rj read my new poem i wrote. i think its heart fealt. love yah and i will stop bye after school.
love cjo -
Outstanding poem! Very nice piece of work!
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That was neat...I certainly liked the last line..."Give us one more killer shred, and let the world speak the truth." Had a tough time with the format, but that's probably just from reading so many structured poems. Cheers. ARSENIC-
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rj you and brad rock i love brads music and you to will rock out with your cock out. well........ lol. great write. love yah.
Connie Jo -
WONDERFUL POEM
This was a beautiful poem you have written about your cousin. I am sure he is honored you feel that way about him. Thank you for sharing this heartfelt poem in our contest. It was a pleasure to read. Take care, Sandy
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