Faithless Spell.
You told me you went to see a witch,
what you didn’t tell me was the spell
she placed upon you gave you an itch
in a way, that it affected me as well.
A faithless spell it was to make you cheat
be unfaithful to the one person you loved.
If I could find her the same spell I’d repeat,
to let her feel what it’s like to be unloved.
I have spells of my own, this spell I can undo
that she placed on you, to bring you back again
into my arms, I can’t live my life without you;
so the spell I placed upon you made you mine again!
Jenelda. Nov 11 2005
Author notes
My Title is "Faithless Spell"
HMMMM, do I believe him?.....that's debatable.
Written November 9th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- It's In The Title by silverscent.
320 points, ended November 11, 2005, 8 entries
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Comments
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Thank you so much for your lovely comment on my poem.
Jennifer.
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this is a really nice write and i love the idea of the gypsy. i think it is intriguing and we have to have something more sinister involved to make us feel like it was something done by somebody else. well done
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Thanks for your comment Silver, it was a challenge and I guess I could've made her a Psychic, but as I work with them and they don't cast spells, or I could've made her a witch
now that may be better, I'll work on it
Jenny.
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Ooh the idea of a gypsy casting a spell is great. The spell to make you cheat, thats an awful one. But I'm glad in the end it turned around. I guess this could be taken another way, such as the reffernce to "gypsy" is an insult, and the spell is in the mind.
Thanks for entering.
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