Liquid gold
lemon drops,
shower down
Sun beams,
touching souls.
Memories blister
like salt,
burning wounds
cut deep,
tears fall.
Quietude dreams
caress hearts,
calm peace
nothing soother,
sleep whispers.
Author notes
all nouns...I hope
Written November 9th, 2005
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A contest entry
- Asylum Smiles and Exercising Creativity (contest) by Violet Moodswing.
300 points, ended November 12, 2005, 2 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Lovely, soothing work
Congratualations on the Silver!!!
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I see you found out what the contest was about and met with the challenge very well yourself. This was a challenge. I think I have always taken nouns for granted but after this I won't. You have wonderful imagery in this poem.
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Very nicely done. And I was able to find any words I wasn't sure of --nounage-- on www.onelook.com/ . That link has been a very valuable utility during the contest since different dictionaries don't always include all definitions or reflect worldwide usages. I think you may be the first person to use --like-- and --nothing--
This is a very relaxing, dreamy poem. Thanks for enterring
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WONDERFUL POEM
This was amazing Sam. You always write such wonderful poems.Take care, Sandy
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Very interesting piece! I like the thought of "sleep whispering"-that has such a calming effect. Best wishes in the contest-u'z the bestest!!! ♥ vj
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AMAZING!!!
WOW!! Terrific job!!! I thought about attempting this, but I honestly don't think I could do it!!! IF I was even able to, it would never come out sounding as smooth and elegant as this!!
This is truly amazing!!! Better scoot those trophy's over, I see another one coming your way!!! Karen 
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