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(((hugsss)))

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Many layers
to their relationship
they both can be tired but happy
and after peeling all the layers away
they're both left in their nappies...

I was pondering deeper and deeper on this
why they always come back for more 
more of each other's enjoyable company
and what I found was not imagined before-
something that's all to blindingly simple,
and is burning at their core…

 

Yes, between them there is the intellectual,
the heartfelt, and the humor,
and the longing
when one or the other
is away from their computer.
It could be that they both are nuts
or nuts about each other,
but the reason they get back together
is simply to get another
(((hugsss))) !

 

All day they work their grinding jobs
of toil and drudgery,
and ever in the back of their minds
is this simple little thing
that they rush out to their cars for
and hurry home in hopes to receive
just one more tiny eency-weency
little one of these-
(((hugsss))) !

 

If you say that words are best
when they aren’t invisible,
then I’d have to disagree
for what makes us indivisible
are the words that are not spoken
like nibbles on the lobes
of the ears that do not hear them
instead they’re swaddled in the robes
of one another’s uninhibited
freely given little things
that are nothing really, but mean the world
to the likes of you and me--
(((hugsss))) !

 


There are many surface to investigate
that exist between these two
conveying understanding, smiles,
and the occasional boo-hoo’s,
a kaleidoscope of broken glass
in a prismatic display of emotional goo…

but the one thing they both anticipate
staring bug-eyed at their screens
are those simple, impeccable, unrestrained
tugging little things-
(((hugsss)))

 


 

Author notes

A deep penetrating self-psychoanalysis of why I IM with my AP daughter SwtAsWine, with her input, of course! (((hugsss))) lol
Written November 9th, 2005

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  • wbiro gold member
    November 10, 2005
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    thanks, cloven, yes, a departure is never to be denied! lol

  • wbiro gold member
    November 10, 2005
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    thank, ImmortalUndead, glad you still like (((hugsss!))) in the afterlife! lol

  • wbiro gold member
    November 10, 2005
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    thanks, Midnight-Rose, glad you enjoyed my (((hugsss!)))


  • wbiro gold member
    November 10, 2005
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    Thank you, Holly, and as for 'Tina', she also get's misbehaving fairy dust! lol ((((hugsss!)))

  • wbiro gold member
    November 10, 2005
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    glad you enjoyed my (((hugsss))) bedazzled! lol

  • wbiro gold member
    November 10, 2005
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    lol

  • wbiro gold member
    November 10, 2005
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    your forgot the (((hugsss!))) lol

  • wbiro gold member
    November 10, 2005
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    glad you liked it, Oh Moony niece of mine! (hugsss!) lol

  • wbiro gold member
    November 10, 2005
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    thank you granddaughter! (hugsss)! lol

  • OurxBeginning
    November 10, 2005
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    Aaaw this is really sweet, and I love the background. It's really bubbly..and um..just awesome! Good job

    ~Love Always
    Your Grandaughter


  • WishMeAway--x
    November 10, 2005
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    HAHA i love hugs! this is sooo great...waiting for more!~ur niece~MOONY~

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    November 10, 2005
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    There is nothing to say to this but....

    > <


  • vampira1665 silver member
    November 10, 2005
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    I agre 100%. I long for those hugs each and everyday.



    Hugs and bites, Your Partner in Death


  • FallingSideways silver member
    November 9, 2005
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    I think your are trying to smother the ocassional and sometimes unexpected darkside out of me with the (((hugss))
    Once again you are able to construct something despite the sleep deprived states
    ~Swt


  • bedazzled
    November 9, 2005
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    I really like this it has a good even rythym to it and has a unique message


  • SexyAngel0418
    November 9, 2005
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    aww... This is really sweet AP Dad!!! You did a great job on this one!!! I really like it!!! Great job!!!

    Hugs,
    Beth

    PS Check out my contest... You could have fun with it ... allpoetry.com/contest/1615245


  • cloven gold member
    November 9, 2005
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    I like it, uplifting and light, a wonderfull peice

  • wbiro gold member
    November 9, 2005
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    Virtual kisses? Yech! lol


  • lavender shadows
    November 9, 2005
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    Ooh, love the background. Very neat!



    (...what about virtual kisses? )
    Edited on Nov 09, 7:55 p.m. because ''.

  • She Stole My Voice
    November 9, 2005
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    I really liked this.

    ~ImmortalUndead~


  • Midnight-Rose
    November 9, 2005
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    good writte I really enjoyed it.. keep writting!
    -Rachelle


  • wbiro gold member
    November 9, 2005
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    background... Dho! make that Doh! I DO and I DID create one, even a pic! Oh thank you my short-term memory prodder! lol
    Edited on Nov 09, 7:25 p.m. because ''.


  • lavender shadows
    November 9, 2005
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    Woohoo! Here's some more for you.



    The only thing here (because it's critical lavender here! lol) is that you should have a background with hugs... that would be really great!

    Anyhow, of course you too did a fabulous job as always. It is crazy how we love virtual hugs so much. shrugs

    Anyhow,
    Chrissie


  • wbiro gold member
    November 9, 2005
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    Thank you, Holly! Imagine, rushing home from work for a virtual hug! Rediculous! lol
    Edited on Nov 10, 10:00 p.m. because ''.

  • Holly Ritz
    November 9, 2005
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    Hey, this was cool. I love huggs!!! Nobody can ever get enough of them, and there are so many ways to do it, and they are for everyone. I give you a virtual hug for making me smile.
    ~~Holly


  • wbiro gold member
    November 9, 2005
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    Thank you Molly, you may take this poem as a little peek into the 'why' of AP families!

  • wbiro gold member
    November 9, 2005
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    Thanks again, Angela, for being you!

  • Molly Densmore silver member
    November 9, 2005
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    This is a very well written and nice write. I love the great message and the wonderful theme of love. This is very good and I really liked it. You have described a great relationship that seems very loving.


  • imonlyme7
    November 9, 2005
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    Ohhh this is just too sweet! Awesome job!

  • wbiro gold member
    November 9, 2005
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    thanks greatly, James! A little slice of life there!


  • James R
    November 9, 2005
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    This was a great write Very well thought out had beautiful meaning. Thanks for shareing this wonderful write.


  • wbiro gold member
    November 9, 2005
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    Thanks for the caring comment, Bel, yes, there is a special hard-fought bond between some AP father/daughters, and at its core... you guessed it! Those unassuming little things! Life is so simple sometimes! lol


  • Celticmoon
    November 9, 2005
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    Now is there any better reason to have an IM with someone you so dearly love and appreciate? I think not. I for one only IM with those I feel I have a bond with on one level or another.
    An Im with such a person is one of the few things I look forward to each day. It's the best way to brighten my day and make me smile.

    Another wonderful piece sweetie. And to my dear SwtAsWine a very lovely lady most deserving of a sweet friend like yourself.



    Blessings
    Bel

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