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Lost In Love And Death

So this boy one day.
Decided to OD on everything he had.
He shot up his heroin.
With a cigarette in his mouth.
He knew he'd die,
It was just a matter of time.
He thought about his family,
And how they would actually react.
To see him dead,
He figured that his friends would get over it in time.
He'd figured that his girlfriend,
Would probably just cry.

He thought about the fact he'd be letting so many people down.
He suddenly panicked.
And realized that he didn't want to go.
He didn't know what to do.
He called the ambulance.
Told them his story.
He could hear its sirens in the distance.

This boy you see,
Refused to cry.
He didn't want people to know he was hurting inside.
But when everything started going dark,
A single tear fell down his cheek.

The ambulance arrived.
They found him there.
The needle he used,
Next to his side.
They tried to save him.
Try to give him a second chance.

He was gone though.
His eyes were closed,
And his face was pale.
He wasn't around anymore.

The people in the ambulance called his parents.
All they could do was cry.

His girlfriend, this special girl,
Was found hanging in her favorite tree,
Him and her would climb it together.
Sit in it and talk about nothing for hours.

Two special people,
Lost in love and death.

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Not Personal.
Written November 9th, 2005

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  • Rayn E Daze
    May 20, 2006
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    This was amazing.
    It made me cry.
    I guess I have can relate to it on a personal level.
    But it was so intense.
    It was like telling a story, and I really wanted to know how it would end.
    Nice job.


  • jeii
    December 30, 2005
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    this is very powerful. romeo and juliet style. somewhat. either way, this is such a great write. i applaud you. your words are amazing and carry much impact. your story in general sent so much thought through my head. you're a wonderful writer. keep up the great work!

  • BabyintheCorner
    November 14, 2005
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    it's a sad story. i'm sorry he couldn't have lived.

  • dyingsoul89
    November 10, 2005
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    Awww... such a sad and beautiful piece. I loved it. Amazing job.