Kindred loving Lady Raven
and Lord Crow put their wings to flight
beyond the grave then met one eve
as amorous spirits of the night!
A dark angelic daughter spawned
Vampiress Angel from the shades
of their nether-worldly gatherings
in the blood-tint moonlight of the glade.
Together there they tied the knot
upon the vows of afterlife
that they both inhabit as phantoms now
as a Dark Lord and his Lady...
A ring that binds, a picket fence,
a garden in the nightly mist
is all she asked, and once received
she seals with her deadly kiss!
'Partners in Death' together now
reigning over the unliving
quick to take the soul away
from you who are uncaring and ungiving!
This mystifying matrimony set
in black ivory in an inlaid chest
that holds the essence of their love
which feeds the shadows of their breasts!
Hugs and bites, Mi'Amore!
Author notes
Marriage Poem of the Afterlife- between vampira1665 and wbiro
Written November 9th, 2005
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OMG! This is so stunninly beautiful! Takes my breath way. Such words spilled and captured wonderfully! My oh my oh my!
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to my dark angelic daughter, luv ya, my little spirit of the night!
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thank you kindly, Angela! A breath of night to you!
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Oh my, you never stop amazing me! Wow the image going through my mind.
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Daddy!!!this was amazing! awww....I loved reading this one! ! Another favorite of mine among your works!
love u daddy
your dark angelic daughter
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thanks, co-dad! lol glad you got a scream out of it!
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Brilliantly penned with to the lady raven and her charming life
This is a very deep ingaged poem of imagery and it totaly rocks
Thank you for allowing me to read and comment on your work.. -
Thanks, Elenna, glad you enjoyed our 'Marriage Poem of the Afterlife'!
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thanks, Silversnow, glad you liked it! I remember doing a poem about you and... um... someone... Redrose I believe, in a contest a while back!
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Oh, forgot to weave the 'hugs and bites' in there...! 's and bites, oh mi amore!
Edited on Nov 09, 3:52 p.m. because ''. -
Ohhhh yes, I remember that night! This was perfection! I am gonna share this with everyone I know. Great job, I'm
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Hugs and bites, Your Partner in Death -
Well Done
Wonderful, powerful, intoxicating! I'm captured by your words! -
I'm not sure how to describe this. Most definitely dark but with a hint of sweetness, is my best description. The imagery was stunning, though, and for some reason this particular line really stuck out for me:
". . . in the blood-tint moonlight of the glade."
Anyways, great write and pretty picture!
~Ss
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