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Oh, Soldier

*To Dodd:
Oh, soldier(repeat)
Oho, soldier(repeat)
Grab your bible, follow me(repeat)
I'm in god's infantry(repeat)
Lay my bible across my chest(repeat)
Tell my lord I done my best(repeat)
Oh, soldier(repeat)
Oho, soldier(repeat)
Grab your bible, follow me(repeat)
I'm in god's infantry(repeat)*

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Written November 9th, 2005

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  • -Rosie-
    November 9, 2005
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    i think its a cool little song... great work... well anyways... see ya later... i might have a party the 18th... well gotta go... seeya!

    Jackie
    Edited on Nov 16, 8:37 p.m. because 'ok it is actully the 18 not 17... gosh what is wrong with me?'.

  • LovyDovy
    November 9, 2005
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    I agree with SuicidalMother. I started adding a tune to it as I was reading it too. I was singing to the song or marching song "I don't know and I don't care"... then something something something... "1,2,3,4".
    Well you get the point.
    Good job. Keep it up.
    I'd like to read more of your work.
    In fact, I'll go do that right now.

  • FrenchKiss
    November 9, 2005
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    This is actually pretty good.
    When I was reading it, I started to sing it a little.
    It's sort of like a short song.
    Good job.
    Keep it up.
    -Ray (Desiree)