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Died for love

Away from homes like hell
I met a boy I loved so well
he came and took my heart from me
and now he wants to set me free
he sat a strange girl on his knee
and told her things he never told me
I ran home and cried on my bed
not a word to mother I said
dad came home late that night
he searched for me left and right
he ran upstairs my door he broke
he saw me hanging from a rope
he grabbed his knife to cut me down
and on the floor this letter he found:
Dig a grave, and Dig it Deep,
Place a statue at my feet,
And on that statue place a dove
To show the World I Died for LOVE.

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Written November 9th, 2005

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  • greenpeach
    November 9, 2005
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    beautiful and expressive. it didn't seem forced, but flowed well. i really liked this poem. good write.

  • greenpeach
    November 9, 2005
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    beautiful and expressive. it didn't seemed forced, but flowed well. i really liked this poed. good write.

  • MitchBade
    November 9, 2005
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    this is fucking wonderful very awesome keep it up great writing much love and peace oh and p.s. keep writeing and let me know when you come up with something else this is pretty tight piece