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Wakinyan Dance (Clogyrnach)

Wakinyan dances on the night
Heyoka twists to stir a fright
Skies weep shadowed tears
Upon dawning years
Eyes and ears
Brilliant bright.

Author notes

Wakinyan=Thunderbeings
Heyoka=Sacred Clown
Written November 9th, 2005

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  • grannyeri gold member
    November 11, 2005
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    Congratulations on winning gold!


  • Samplette gold member
    November 11, 2005
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    This is really good. Congratulations..
    Sam

  • heart on sleeve
    November 10, 2005
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    this is great and very well rhymed no flaws at all, i loved the line " skies weep shadowed tears" great use of words and metaphors really good lol abigailxxx


  • B Chandler
    November 9, 2005
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    nicely well done