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Opening Universe

Opium smile, galaxy lover
Taste truth, emotion, stars collision
Eyes display messages, macrocosms
Soul windows opening freedom, beauty, passion

Visionary perception?
Human creation, alternative reality
Breakdown perspective, finding doorways, novel mystery
Search, discovery, vision...

Epilogue:  Understanding

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Written November 9th, 2005

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  • nichtmich silver member
    November 12, 2005
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    Congratualtions on the Bronze Well done, poet!!!


  • Violet Moodswing Greeters member
    November 9, 2005
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    Very nicely done, and with quite a message too. Your groupings of nouns leads us through the piece from the beginning. Very nice ending too . Thanks for enterring.