When those two true hearts meet with love
then their relationship is blooming in their souls
When those souls of two bodies meet with hearts
then there is a new life appearing to take care
My love is a small world in a big ocean
and the whispering wind on the shore blows me away
Any foul game on love can be lead into drown for good
Because love is not game to play with emotions
Not a game of lust neither
Although I can not promise you a life of wealth
but I can promise you a life with love and care
When you feel sad then I will dry your tears
and I will be your savior when you are helpless
All I want you to be mine as I live my life
Our heart and mind can not tell two different things
other than one thing to live with true love
My love on you is not a game....It's True Love !
Author notes
True love is all happiness
Written November 9th, 2005
A contest entry
- Write something beautiful by LillianEmrys.
300 points, ended November 14, 2005, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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EXCELLENT!
This is a beautiful love poem .What a statement you have made here ,love is not a game,neither can emotion go by love rather it does go by genuine intentions that lovers have for one another.Is that not true?I pray that men and women will learn to abstain from playing games with one another and be real. -
oh this is such a sweet poem and I loved reading it....
You are right,love is not a game and it should not be mistaken for lust...love is just love and those who are in love will know it better than the others...
Yes,true love is all happiness because when you have everything in life that you can ask for but you donthave true love,you'd feel as if you dont have anything worth living for.
Thank you for writing and sharing a beautiful poem.
nellymichelle. -
I like this.
It isn't over done and overly sappy
has just the right amount of elements in it...
Olivia -
Oh wow, this was really good. i loved this alot. my favorite lines were: "Although I can not promise you a life of wealth
but I can promise you a life with love and care
When you feel sad then I will dry your tears"....loved it!
this is exactly how i feel about someone in my life. i'm just really glad you were able to say what sometimes is hard for me. Anyways great job, GOOD LUCK IN CONTEST! and even if you don't win you should continue to write!!!
~*Cammy*~
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