Feelings of depression,
feelings of death,
feelings of suicide,
just puts me to the test.
nothing I say,
nothing I do,
Can keep me from,
wanting to end it all.
Right now I'm losing my mind,
it's only a little time,
till I feel the pain of death,
and the pain of regret.
I wish I could only go back,
to my little years,
when I never had any tears,
and had barley any fears.
but that time is over,
now I have many fears,
Nothing can stop any of my tears,
and this has been going on for years.
I always have to fight,
I can never hold on tight,
every single day and night,
I think of suicide.
I just wish I had a life,
but I'll never know the meaning of it,
but now my time has come.
I can end it all,
with these pilla and that knife right by my side,
and then I can just,
watch my life as it falls.
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this is just a poem i wrote a couple months ago when i was pissed off so yea
Written November 9th, 2005
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Apart from the few spelling mistakes this poem is actually good. I feel the same alot of times -
awsume \m/!!!
first thing im gonna start with is great poem!!
and keep writting the second thing is suicide is never an option or the answer i self harmed and tried suicide ad i can tell u not the best idea if u eva feel like this then seek help from friends and family its the best way to go around things ...well im gonna stop babling now lolz keep the brillaint writting up hun!!! awsume poem !!!! \m/ xxxxxsophiexxxxxx
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this was really good...i loved how it all flowed together and i liked the emotion of it all...i just really liked the feel of the whole thing...you are a really good poet and keep up the good work....nice job
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