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sex on the beach

We both lie cuddled on the beach
While you whisper in my ear telling me you've got a lesson you want to teach
And promised me that it was something that I will never forget
Promising that it would last from morning to sunset
And it would make me come again and again
Promising to take me to places I've never been
I just laid back and took all his words in
No more talking, I was ready for him to begin
He began kissing me starting from my feet stopping at my thighs
He could see that I was impatient and I knew he seen the desire behind my eyes
He stopped and placed 1,000 kisses and love marks
Now the beach was beginning to get dark
He rolled his tongue over my panties up to my breast
Touching and feeling both while whispering "Are you ready for what's next ?"
Before I could answer he brushed his lips against mine
Then his kissed me passionately , taking his time
He began to kiss and nibble my ear
Telling me to let my love go there was nothing to fear
After placing kisses over my body
He said he was ready to taste me
I laid in the sand as he made love to me with his tongue
After that he told me it wasn't over, there was more to come
I couldn't take it anymore,
Because I wanted all of him and more
He then stuck his nice hard hard cock inside of me
Going in and out
Making me moan and scream
Then after he did even more wild and crazy things to me
As we made love on the beach
Never have I had my body quiver
And that was our day at the beach

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Written November 9th, 2005

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  • RalphL
    January 5, 2006
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    Steaming

    Very hot and very wet it really makes me work up a sweat. Full of steam full of desire you sure make my temperature go up higher.


  • gothangel
    November 13, 2005
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    wow....this was a cool poem....i loved it and nice job.....i liked how you made it hot yet beautiful...nice job and keep up the awesome work!!!!!!


  • November 11, 2005
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    'wow is all i can really say. i think this write is exquisite and beautifully written. it makes me kind of hot. keep on keepin on!

  • capnbill
    November 9, 2005
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    Very expressive!(among other things, he,he,he...)


  • shattered-dreams-xx
    November 9, 2005
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    WOW!!! this is hot...im jelous lol great write ...im happy for yah this is awesome!!

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  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    November 9, 2005
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    Whoooooaaaaaa baby! What I wouldn't give to have a day like THAT at the beach! My, my, my...how incredibly erotic this is! Quite enjoyed reading this one! Thank you for sharing

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