Glass house
Prism mirror
Serenity ember
Wisdom surfacing.
Yellow glow
Star panorama
Bold gaze
self thought.
Expounding panic
Perception mirage
Hollow dream
Prismatic rays.
Haziness effect
Splash wave
Life cycle
End triumph.
Cemetery stay
Ritual deeds
Time sands
Repeat start.
Energy constant
Child cries
Process fusion
Infinity unison.
Deep analysis
Truth portrait
Clear picture
Journey begining.
Author notes
option 5
'self explanetory'
Written November 9th, 2005
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manoj -
thank you for entering my contest and following ALL the rules. you will be rewarded lol! this poem is full of lots of great imagery and desription, worded well. it was quite a thought requiring piece and i enjoyed reading. good luck - HG
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Have nice time,
manoj -
Haha, I guess my return the favor button knew I really liked this piece the first time I read it so it brought me back for another look. Still a great piece
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Thanks dear for appreciation.
Sing sweet songs ... always.
manoj -
This is so very creativly done! It took me to such a unique place when I read; like a contemplation of life's cycle... I really like this alot. Very unique, great imagery and thought pondering presence! ~~ ~~
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Thank you very much for appreciation.
Have nice time,
manoj -
Very nicely and creatively done. It is definately reflective of thoughts. It has a bit of a dreamy tone. Thanks so much for enterring
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