Look deep into my eyes
And you will see more than just a surprise
Not just the lust on the flesh
but of those care,affections for you
You will see love in my eyes,
And will see not just love but
A tender heart, which is yours
And also if you look deeper
You will see your love flowing
With mine, and you will know
Our love will be for all time
Expressing our gratitude to our LORD
To ever remain with LOVE
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Dedications to the beauty of love which made my life so peaceful & my thanks to lord for given me such a wonderful partner as my wife.
Written November 9th, 2005
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Fantastic show. Artistically using words to entertain the reader, thats what I believe writing is all about and you have acheived taht here. keep writing, fantastic work
thankyou very much for your coment on my peice, it's very much appreciated, thanks also for all the thought taht you put into your critique, it is very encouraging!
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Beautiful write my friend
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Your wife is a lucky lady indeed to have such a beautiful poem of Gratitude written about her and thanking Creator/tion /God / Nature/Lord and all that made her be whom and what she is and send her your way. The love smiles in this one,
Reenie
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this must be what we all seek, a shared love where each partner gives equally combining their emotions together to form one, bonded in every way, mentally, physically and spiritually, a very deep meaningful message in so few lines, really heartwarming to read
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There are various ways through which we can take a look at love.
It still boils down to the fact that each partner must play meaning ful roles to make the love memorable,refreshing and exacting for one another.GREAT WRITE!
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Good Poem
Wow!! Short & Cute I liked it. U should check out some of my work and tell me what you think.
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