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Green Arbors

Missing image
by a crystal pool
under the dark green arbors
we wait patiently

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another Haiku!
Written November 8th, 2005

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  • cloudydays667
    November 9, 2005
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    I love the rhyming in this peice. It flows very well. It really fits well together. Great job.
    Cloudy

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    November 9, 2005
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    Oh wow...I just love the imagery packed into these three lines you have here! It's beautiful. I've always love imagery like this. Kudos to you!
    Edited on Nov 09, 9:31 because ''.

  • Celticpoet gold member
    November 8, 2005
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    My thanks for your very flattering praise...I am but a beginner in the world of poetry..in particular the Haiku genre...I have only been writing for just over 2 years now!...A late starter you might say!...regards to you for your positive critique!