Oh Mirror Mirror
what do I see
many memories
looking at me
Color of green
closed so tight
scared to death
dark of night
Unforgotten
haunting eyes
black and blue
hidden cries
See the tears
fall like rain
sad memories
flashes the pain
I looked happy
way back when
so long ago
remember then
Morning sunshine
smiles reflected
pain and sorrow
now rejected
New found smile
mirror cracked
is that sorrow
staring back
Mirror Mirror
what do I see
uncertainty
looking at me
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jan
Written November 8th, 2005
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WONDERFUL CONTEST
Thank you so much Sam. Sandy
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Hi Sandy, very nice poem and more of rythemic, i really like such poems. well done and good luck.. Anu
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Fantastic job! That is so awesome! Everything seemed perfect - flow, form, word choice, everything. It was simply amazing and a wonderful write. I really enjoyed reading this awesome piece. Not sure how to describe it, but it was truly beautiful. You have an amazing talent for writing poetry. Good luck in the contest.
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Very well done Sandy - the internal filters that sees what others don't, or are not allow to has spoken. A very nice flow - easy to read.
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this is a great poem, you write very well. i liked you form, short and to the point, not to wordy, yet not so short it leaves you wanting. great job and good luck.
jan -
amazing!!
WOW!!! this is so amazing! how easily your life can change without knowing until we look back on the past. this is amazing. i love the rhyming and i love the idea of looking into the mirror to see yourself as you used to be. i like this alot and love how its true. great work i really loved this!!!!
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I absolutely LOVE that picture! It is so true, as is your poem.
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awesome write. i really enjoyed it. I like the picture that goes along wiht it too.
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A wonderful write Sandy..I have had simular feelings and thoughts when looking in the shadows of my past..Creative and well done. Best wishes in the contest.
Sam
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