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Just a Rant

Are you kidding me?
I wouldn’t do that if my life depended on it…
I told you when we met "I am not domestic!"
Did you think that would change?
Your hands aren’t broke,
Neither are your feet
So get your ass up
And make your own food to eat.

I told you when we met “I am not domestic!”
What made you think that would change?

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Written November 8th, 2005

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  • Dennis Pickering
    December 3, 2006
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    Gets a Grin

    AGREED

  • Pari Ali
    January 13, 2006
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    hahaha I like this like my daughter would say "You go girl!" say it like it is.


  • eternalpoet
    December 18, 2005
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    3 Stars ***

    oo.. angry young lady .. forcing out the anger.. .. *gulp* ... humn.. i hope this poem did make you feel better... its small but says it perfectly on how you must have had felt at that moment.. .. nice write.. good work.. thanks for sharing

    take cares and have a nice time my dear friend.. just keep it up.. your humble little friend... ... .... ..... - vic ( who else? )

  • MisInclined
    December 9, 2005
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    Hahahaha! More women need to say this to their men - husbands or boyfriends. Or to their girlfriends, for that matter I totally sympathize with this rant.

    Actually, I just make em take me out to eat when they say this

    Fabulous rant!

  • Just4u
    November 9, 2005
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    I'd make you a chocolate cake but my oven is on the fritz...maybe I could cook one in an electric fry pan putting the cake pan inside...lol...don't laugh...you never know until you try
    right...
    Hugs...Eddy


  • Annastacia
    November 9, 2005
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    Mmmmm, Chocolate cake! I think I need someone to make me cake!

    Thank you for reading.

    Big Hugs Back!
    Anna


  • Annastacia
    November 9, 2005
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    Sometimes it is just nice to rant a little. Of course tonight I did cook dinner. lol.

    Anna


  • Annastacia
    November 9, 2005
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    Thank you so much Vampiric Fox Demon, I am glad you could see the humor in it as well...
    Anna

  • Vampiric Fox Demon
    November 9, 2005
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    lol. great poem! catches my emotions so well. keep on writing!


  • Maureen silver member
    November 8, 2005
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    I can identify with this because this is very close to what I said to my husband. LOL

    Enjoyed this..well done!

    ♥ Maureen

  • Just4u
    November 8, 2005
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    Ahhhhh...let em starve... or as old Marie Antoinette said
    "let them eat cake...

    It sounds to me like they should be cooking for you for everyone deserves a break from time to time...afterall how damn hard is it to throw something in the mike or heat up a can of soup,
    for pete's sake. I cook all the time, just whipped up a big
    hotdish, so will have grub for days...lol

    Hugs...Eddy

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