Sitting here,
drowning in my emotions,
I feel my sorrows bleed away,
I hear myself scream at no one.
No one hears me
no one sees me
no one understands what it's like to be on the
inside of this jail cell I like to call life.
I cant move.
I cant speak.
I can feel myself fading away,
but somehow, I cant let go.
Something is holding me back.
I see something.
Its coming closer now.
I can feel it.
I feel an ultimate power rise above me,
calling me,
taunting me,
telling me that I'm not good enough.
I know I should know better,
but I listen to it,
Heeding its every word,
but I am strong,
and I rise above it.
Its gone now I hope
but not for long...
Author notes
Just so were clear on it, THIS IS NOT A SUGGESTIVE POEM!! I was bored and couldnt think of anything else to write.
Written November 8th, 2005
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hmmm, very dark. It really reminds me of stuff I used to write a couple years ago. That's not a bad thing or anything, at least I don't think it is. but it just reminded me...
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-gibson -
OOHHH!!! Very dark poem!! I LIKE!! lol! BUt seriously, I think that this is a good poem! (Glad it isn't true...) But you put your emotions into it and that shows!! Keep up the good work! I look forward to reading more of your work!
Tree Smacker -
This was a little too "dark" for my taste, but other than that it was an emotion-filled work. I really felt the hurt and pain and torment of the words in the write. Great Job Cuz!! ArchAngel
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