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Psychedelia Melon Realm (Nouns Only)

Missing image
Tongue Two Tab
Tickle Taste
Transportation

Hearing Colors
Shout Loud
Shyness Laugh

See Sound Rhyme
Brilliance Beauty
Bliss

Smell Space
Press Down
Pride Development

Touch Air
Wondrousness Wind
Wig Out Wild

Think Terra Firma
Imaginativeness Frenzy
Triumph Fire

Hallucinogenic
Seventh Heaven?
Twilight Zone?
Sixties Child Nose



Author notes

Right Arm Man - Farm Out
Shazam, Hot Damn, Eye Yam !!!
All Nouns ~ Option #2
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  • Rizzie
    September 16, 2008
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    very nice write, it fits the prompt well


  • Game Master
    June 23, 2007

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    Touch Air
    Wondrousness Wind
    Wig Out Wild
    That was a strong part in this poem I think, and the background is cute


  • Madcap
    February 27, 2007

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    A very apt discrition of what really happens when you take the plunge, I like the use of nouns only, I think it adds potency to the work. Thank you, good one.


  • nichtmich silver member
    November 23, 2005
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    Thanks, from one granny to another As a "noun only" contest, it was pretty tricky Appreciate it!!!


  • grannyeri gold member
    November 23, 2005
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    What a psychadelic melon - great photo, and inspiring poem you have created here - such a collection of words, and such alliteration too. Impressive piece.


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    November 19, 2005
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    This is so cute..I have to go look for more of the ones I missed.. your good with word useage.. having fun here..thank you for sharing..Linda


  • nichtmich silver member
    November 14, 2005
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    Thanks

    Thistle/Gold Trophy

  • nichtmich silver member
    November 12, 2005
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    Thank you so much for the award Thistle, I really appreciate it Who knew my wild and wicked ways "way back then" would ever pay off??? LOL, kidding. Truthfully, this was the funnest contest I've ever been in

  • nichtmich silver member
    November 9, 2005
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    Thanks Thistle, I tried to double check everything and still missed one (or put the wrong form of the word) LOL, but Vivi Amara caught it for me This is tricky, but lots of fun


  • Violet Moodswing Greeters member
    November 9, 2005
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    Lol, this is great. You even made me look up a word. I had no idea that --Think-- had a noun usage, but there is was in the dictionary --all nouny-- Nicely descriptive and a fun read.


  • FallingSideways silver member
    November 9, 2005
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    WELL DONE!!
    Not an easy thing to pull off and I LUV the imagery you were able to convey despite the restrictions.
    Best Wishes
    ~Swt


  • Sara Bellem
    November 8, 2005
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    Wow... Again, I don't think I will ever read a poem or piece quite like this again Thanks for creating a fun write, its always refreshing to read things like this, sometimes a poet gets too serious with their writings (I am definitely guilty of this) and never takes the time to just make fun or have joy in expressing life, ect. Keep penning Sara

  • nichtmich silver member
    November 8, 2005
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    Re: Pschedelia Melon Realm - Thanks for catching that sweetie, that was supposed to be "Imaginativeness" LOL I also saw that my picture didn't upload, so now it's all taken care of. I chose my colors to match the picture and it wasn't even there!!! LOL (Must have been having a Flashback ) Deb


  • Viv
    November 8, 2005
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    I like this one loads... but quick.. "imaginative" isn't a noun! Change it before Thistle sees...
    I loved this one though, especially the colours

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