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You...

you held me close
took my hand,
and promised me
forever.

we spent our nights
stargazing,
life seemed so
perfect.

She shattered
our dreams,
and stole you away
crushed.

tears brought me comfort
late at night,
your empty promises
echoed.

my shattered world
is finding its pieces,
I will love you though
always.




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I miss him..
Written November 7th, 2005

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  • yourarmlessbuddy
    November 7, 2005
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    i can relate.. guys seem to enjoy gazing at the greener grass at the other side, and never realize what it is they miss... thakns for sharing your poem