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Cinnamon Send Me

Cinnamon scent brown song of my heart,
wrap round pastry baked almost dark.
Swirled in my cup of cider clove apple,
warm holiday memories of family love ample.

Scene of baked apple or pumpkin pies,
visions of sugar plumes dance in my eyes.
Scent of you wafting brings sweet memories,
love and security of childhood dear to me.

Brown apple Betty take me away,
brown sugared dreams never to stray.
Cinnamon sweet songs I deliver to my own,
loved ones and friends welcomed into my home.

Strong pungent natural warm spice of life,
Cinnamon memories fill my heart in song's heights.

           ~~~Suseann~~~
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cinnamon scent
Written November 7th, 2005

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  • Sherry gold member
    November 9, 2005
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    Sounds wonderful and thank you. Oh that is heart
    warming to thank you would send me a virtual
    cinnamon roll and some hot cider aren't you a doll.
    (Thanks)a millon and many hugs ya way
    Edited on Nov 09 because ''.


  • suseann
    November 8, 2005
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    Well Sherry.Guess I'll have to surf the net for a virtual cinnamon roll and hot spiced cider to send you.I'll keep my eyes peeled for them.LOL~~Suseann


  • Sherry gold member
    November 8, 2005
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    Oh this is wonderful wish I could have been there so can I come over for some wonderful cinnamon and baking of yours? Tell ya what I'll do the dishes after tummy is digested loved this and of course wishes I could be there to share. ♥
    Edited on Nov 08, 3:36 p.m. because ''.


  • Puppydog gold member
    November 8, 2005
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    SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL!

    This is so beautiful! the aromas of the holidays; I don't have them now but the memories are wonderful.


  • Frogzter gold member
    November 8, 2005
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    MMMMMM.... that smells sooooo good! This was a lovely write and I could not only picture it, but could smell it as well. Well done... Good luck in the contest and thanks for entering!
    Blessings
    Frog


  • Frozentearz
    November 8, 2005
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    I love reading poems with such great memories,
    and I love the scent you picked to write about,
    We can all write about sad things but such a challange to keep things bright and you have done that well with this wonderful scnet actually a few scents
    well done
    Tears


  • pentopaper
    November 7, 2005
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    This is a lovely scent to write about! Cinnamon is just an irresistable scent!! You described it so well, and made me hungry with all the yummy foods described!! This is so warm and cozy, triggering many happy moments for me too!! I wish you the best in this contest with this wonderful write!! Karen

    PS-I love the background too, reminds me of cinnamon apples...yum!


  • Lyrical Soul silver member
    November 7, 2005
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    Yum...my two favorite flavors. Cinnamon and brown sugar. Doesn't really matter to me what they are on...just as long as they are there. Yum.
    ~Lyrical

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