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Loss of Innocence

I try not to betray my conscious state as you creep into my room as silently as possible. Moments later I feel your hand glide over my thighs underneath the blankets that cover my body from the tips of my toes to base of my neck and I shudder. I gasp as I feel your hand make it past my hips, brushing softly against the edges of my bare breasts. At last, my dreams are coming true.
I feel the sheets shift as you pull them back and join me within my warm domain, pressing your hard chest against the soft flesh of my back. A gasp escapes my lips as you grasp and cup my breast, rolling it around in the palm of your hand.  Then I feel your need brush up against my warm cheeks, and I push back, nuzzling it between my crevice.
Slowly we begin a steady rhythm, back and forth, back and forth as we continue our innocent fun. I feel you harden your resolve as my female fluids coat your manhood. Suddenly you hips pull back from me, and I feel the tip of something I’ve not felt before against my flower. Is tonight the night? Is tonight the night that will see all my inner most wishes come true?
I wonder all of these things until I feel the soft graze of your teeth moving down along the side of my neck. My hips buck as you bite down into the flesh of the base of my neck, pressing back against you as hard as my body can. Pain, searing pain as I give away the last bits of my innocence to you and become a woman. Yet the pain is soon replaced by a new feeling as I remain still, impaled up to the hilt of your sword.
Soon my hips are moving forewords and then back again, first timidly but as the desire in me washes away the pain my bucking becomes more and more urgent. I feel you responding to my want, my need as you roll your hips into me, giving me all that I can take and then some. Tightly you grip me, tweaking my erect nipples, adding to my oh so pleasurable pain.
All thought has long since left me as our bodies move in perfect harmony, the grinding of flesh, the nipping of skin, the pain of pleasure. It’s all so much, so overpowering. Gasps escape me, sweat mixes with other bodily liquids and soon something builds up inside of me, something earth shattering, but then you know it as well for I can feel you swell within me. Then it happens, my mind explodes our bodies tense and shudder, spasm, so many sensations that its all overwhelmingly…
I awaken within your arms, wrapped up in your love and I know that I’m safe.

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Written November 7th, 2005

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  • Apprentice
    November 10, 2005
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    Thanks for the praise. I'ts been a long time since I've written anything on allpoetry.com and I think my abscense has given me time to change my writing style and recharge my batters. Needless to say compliments like yours let me know I'm going in the right direction!


  • cloven gold member
    November 9, 2005
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    WOW, I love it, very very well written, keep up the good work