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Reflection

I comb your long golden hair.
The comb is brazen.
You look at yourself in the silver etched mirror
and I look at the reflection of your eyes.

I've never looked so beautiful in my life.

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I don't know where this came from. I'm not even blonde.
Written November 7th, 2005

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