Trapped in yearning,
Trapped in time.
There's no one here to guide me
But I've got one beam of light.
Maybe if I hold on longer
Things'll be alright.
Raptured memories
Fill my mind.
What happened to those times?
What happened to the girl i was?
Maybe she's hiding within me
Struggling to get out
Or maybe she's gone forever
Never to return.
But wherever life may lead me
I'll never forget those times
When i held onto life
through all it's calamities.
Till the end i'll grasp for the truth.
And till the end,
I'll smile like things are ok.
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Written November 5th, 2005
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Sad but good
Wow... nice job... i like it.. its hears like a person... or a girl like urself..is trapped in her own mind of itself. there's no one eto comfort her, no one to help her get out in this place that shes in, but then again a small bright light spots her with hope and someone will get her sooner or laer if she hangs on and doesnt be negative about herself.. this is also like a puzzle of some sort.. she gets mad, and doesnt have the positve attiude that she has.. and tells herself.. wait..?!?!. i can do this.. i know i can.. (does this making sense, kinda?!)..well sorry if it doesnt.. well overall i love it.. thanks for sharing..
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Amazing piece... I really liked it. Emotional and full of amazing lines. Can't wait to read more by you!
Christie -
I really like this...it has uh....umm....emotion I guess and alot of it!
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I love it. Very good.
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HOW MANY DARK POEMS AND AUTHORS ARE ON THIS SITE???!!! its like ever poem i look into is going down wards!! no offence sweet heart, i still liked ur poem. i was just letting my mind slip out..lol..sorry
hope u dont hate me now
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