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All The Novembers Remembered



It's November batten down the hatches,
slippery roads in slick ice patches.
Tree's are barren devoid of leaf,
nature's falling fast in a deep sleep.

Thanksgiving's feast celebrates bounty,
folks give thanks in towns and county.
For that which nature and the Lord bestowed,
in golden fields of grains they've sowed.

Colder crisp winds blow from the north,
sweaters worn but itchy woolen coarse.
Home hearths blazing red hot fires,
creature comforts indoors transpire.

Hot cups of coco sweet give pause,
Christmas list started for Santa Claus.
Soon snow will create a soft white palette,
blanketing rooftops creating winter palace.

Yes sweet Autumn's gone till another day,
but it won't be long till Spring's on it's way.


          ~~~~Suseann~~~~



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Written November 7th, 2005

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  • forgotten dream
    November 9, 2005
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    a wonderfully descriptive write that really captures a lot of the things that make up november. some great imagery that really brings the senses of the reader alive (itchy weaters, hot cocoa, fires, and the cold). the rhyming sequence gave the piece a nice sense of rhythm and flow and worked well in this charming write. thank you for entering and best of luck in the contest <3


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    November 8, 2005
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    Oh, exceptionally descriptive write. Well done, my friend!


  • Puppydog gold member
    November 7, 2005
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    TRULY BEAUTIFUL!

    Very beautiful; the descriptions are wonderful. I can feel the cold air as I read every word.


  • rosepoet
    November 7, 2005
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    nice work on this poem. to see the seasons passing. it is almost christmas too, felt like it was just last summer.nice tone and good flow alos a well done descriptive piece and quite refreshing too


  • suseann
    November 7, 2005
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    Of course we have counties here.I was born in Wyndotte county and now live in Johnson county.I'll have to Webster Woollen?And coco is at least here the hot mixed combination of scolded milk and powdered cocoa.But thanks my friend for the read and comment effort.~~~Suseann I checked with the dictionary here on AP.Seems we are both correct on Woollen/woolen.Either way is used.
    Edited on Nov 07, 8:01 because 'added'.

  • montez gold member
    November 7, 2005
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    Woollen and cocoa are the correct spelling old love - would you pleae edit?
    A nicely flowing piece of work.
    I particularly liked the rhymes bounty and county, but it's a bit of a cheat because you don't have Counties over there like we do (I think!)
    Tee hee.
    Robin


  • Lyrical Soul silver member
    November 7, 2005
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    Thanks for reminding me of the oncoming FREEEEEEEEEEEEEZE !!! Brrrrr, suseann. This piece made me cold So you see it was so well written that I felt Old Man Winter's bitter chill. I need some of that hot cocoa you mentioned now. My favorite line is "nature's falling fast in a deep sleep". That was very visual suseann. I love that line!

    ~Lyrical


  • simpliterature
    November 7, 2005
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    A well done descriptive piece and quite refreshing too.
    From where I live, there are only two seasons and can only view your given descriptions in the movies.
    The best I can have is to dream of a white Christmas... lol.
    Thanks for sharing.


  • mypassion
    November 7, 2005
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    very descriptive and very poetic. This poem is beautifully written,,brrrrr..It really made me visualize now I am cold.. Best of luck to you in the contest. Much and Respect Brenda


  • Granny Goose silver member
    November 7, 2005
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    I like the brisk pace of this delightful poem, suseann It reminds me of walking in the cold, when our steps are quicker, as if trying to outwit the chilly winds.

    A vivid descriptive write
    Good job, and good luck inthe contest
    Dee


  • suseann
    November 7, 2005
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    Life flashs past doesn't it though? Thank you.

  • Only My Words
    November 7, 2005
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    nice work on this poem. to see the seasons passing. it is almost christmas too, felt like it was just last summer.

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