Hello someone, are you there?
I really need you now to care.
My eyes are blistered, nose is raw,
As I wait for the world’s cold heart to
Thaw
As I wait for the world’s cold heart to
Thaw.
Of course you’re gone, of course you’ve left
Since I am always left with nothing,
Always forgiven to be forgotten.
Of course you’re gone, of course I’m left
To drown myself in my own tears,
I was created to be destroyed.
Hello someone, need you now.
I’m sure my mom will have a cow...
I try to erase each breath from birth,
As I wait for my warm blood to melt the
Earth
As I wait for my warm blood to melt the
Earth.
Of course you’re gone, of course you’ve left
Since I am always left with nothing,
Always forgiven to be forgotten.
Of course you’re gone, of course I’m left
To drown myself in my own tears,
I was created to be destroyed.
God help the outcast who's lying in bed
With a knife in her hand and a gun by her head.
Why did you give me the kingdom
If you were gonna just take it away?
God help the outcasts who’re already dead,
Lying there lifeless all covered in red.
Why did you give them the kingdom
If you were gonna just take it away?
Hello someone, where are you?
I’ve screamed your name 'till I turned blue.
I’m choking on the air I’m breathing,
As I ponder a way to end all my
Pain
As I ponder a way to end all my
Pain.
Of course you’re gone, of course you’ve left
Since I am always left with nothing,
Always forgiven to be forgotten.
Of course you’re gone, of course I’m left
To drown alone in my own tears,
I was created to be destroyed.
Each person somewhere has their match,
Mine just happened to be matches.
Each person somewhere has their soulmate,
Mine just happened to be fate.
Always forgiven to be forgotten,
I was created to be destroyed.
Author notes
I was really upset when I needed to talk to a friend of mine. He had an away message up. This was the third time that week that had happened...
Written February 25th, 2005
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4 Stars ****
Hi Lisa
, how are you ?
well.. thought to jump on your poem today
.. again
so here's a nice song from you ... wow.. its really awesome.. well i am not into lyrics much... niether i understand many of them.. but i loved yours here...i loved the repitition that you made and the way you took the poem.. and the punching end was like.. "WOW, thats like a song !!! " ... wonderful write once again from you. and i am glad to have read it
take cares and have a nice time my dear friend.. just keep it up.. your humble little friend... - vic ( who else? ) -
Beautifully dark
This poem evokes the memory of that Eminem song about the guy who sends him fan mail and never gets an answer and goes crazy. It's beautifully dark, but so much repetition of entire stanzas was not necessary. The "hello someone" lines I loved, and they varied, even if they all started the same. This is my favourite of yours so far.

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