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Whirlpool of Thoughts

As all the problems
Go down the drain.
I can’t help
But feel this pain.

It comes in waves
Like the open sea.
It doesn’t let go
From inside of me.

I whirlpool of thoughts
Deep in my mind.
I wish they would
Get left behind.

They should not matter
For the event is gone.
The battle is over
And I think I’ve won.

I cannot understand
These emotions I feel.
But the hurt in my heart
Is oh, so unreal.

But they will soon be gone
And out of my head.
And I may rest peacefully
In my own bed…

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Written November 6th, 2005

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