Standing in line at the movies
I am staring at the floor
Thinking about the relationship,
I realize I want something more
He won’t kiss me,
He won’t hug me
He just kinda hides us away
Can I live like this another day?
Then he speaks.
Babe what's wrong,
You've been staring at the floor
Just in a daze
For oh so long
Nothings wrong,
I'm just fine.
And I'll stay that way,
For as long as your mine
Sweetie I know your lying
Cause you won’t look me in the eyes
If you’ll just look at me for a second,
I have a surprise
As I look up at him,
I realize his face is close to mine
Before I can say a word,
He gives me a kiss so sweet and divine
Such a soft sweet kiss,
His lips barely brush against mine
I can feel his breath on my neck
And I know he is mine
Are you happy now,
Is that what you wanted?
For me to prove I love you,
Did you like my surprise?
Yes it was,
And now I know your mine
I loved the surprise
Your kiss so sweetly divine
Author notes
... umm the 1st and 2nd stanza and the one line are like plot,then the 3rd stanza is the guy talking,4th is the girl talking,5th is the guy,6th and 7th are just like the scene of what happens,8th is the guy,and 9th is the girl.... enjoy
Written November 6th, 2005
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This is amazing! I love it! Great work!!!
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no it isnt true saddly not yet anyway
lol but i had a dream friday night and this is based on that 
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this is me favorite thing u've every written.. is this true? did u end up goin to the movies with him?? cuz if its true its so so sweet. then again its sweet even if its not true. very well written! got some typos but i'll let u find them. i love it! *claps*
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lol no i did not thank you this is fictional.... o wait i should have prolly put that in my authors comments oh well i shall leave ppl wondering
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good! I like it! But did u get it on with Brian?
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ok just to let everyone know the 3rd stanza and the second to last stanza are spaced wrong and ap does not like me so it wolnt let me fix it and i am glad you al who have commented like it
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beautiful poem! i luv it! it's nicely written! well done, keep it up!
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Very well written. I really liked your style on this poem.
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