differences

I heard noises from outside the other night
I was almost scared
And you weren't there
Honey you weren't even near to me.
Because that night we'd had a fight,
And you'd nearly torn up everything that's dear to me.

Taking photos of your frown-
Honey where's that crown
I put on your head?
Well I don't see you now: there's a crowd

And your laughter-

It ain't all that loud.

Author notes

this is different from what i usually do, it's been less editted and played around with, the language is a lot less complex and poetic. i'm not sure if i like it, just wanted some sort of feedback.
Written November 6th, 2005