Fulfill my desires
Ignite my passion
Melt my heart
Hold me tight
Be my fantasy,
My dream come true
Take my heart, and
Claim my love
Give yourself to me
As I to you
Let our bodies meld
Becoming one
Fill me with
The very essence of you
Let the fires of ecstasy
Engulf our very cores
For all eternity
Drowning us in jubilation
Smothering us in a
Lascivious nirvana
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Written November 6th, 2005
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Enchanting!
A rapturous realm of sensual bliss.
A place where lovers can dwell as one without life's distractions. Oh that it were true. How lovely it would be.
Living in passion and serenity with the one you love.
Very beautiful and calming
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Nice work. I've not read anything by you in a long while. Good to see you're still producing sensual, well written poetry.
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Anyone in particular in mind? Are you successful? Did you arrive at Nirvana? I hope all is well?
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Wow, very passionate and emotive piece of writing, very well written, flows beautifully. The passion you speak of comes through very strongly in this, especially with the words you have used. Wonderful poem Celtic.
~Flowerpot
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Wow I loved this. I agree this was very beautiful and passionate. This is a brilliantly written poem. Wonderful write. I loved it. Keep on writting. Again very good write. SINcerly -Amanda*
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This is a very beautiful and passionately penned heart felt poem
That leaves ones heart yearning for a love so infanite and davine to feel the beauty of you're words as they ring out in each line with a fluent touch of serenity In short I love this brilliantly penned poem and I hope to be reading more of these kind of poems in the future thank you again for allowing me to read you're work and let the wings that carry you beyond the sky
Keep you're heart full of life and love thank you again..rob
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