cool lips on my
tempered skin, shatter the surface
like candy-glass.
Author notes
well.
in one sense, it is a haiku.
in another sense, it is not.
and, it is fictional in a sense too. dagnabbit.
Written November 6th, 2005
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you are so cute with your comments!!!
thankyou
you make me smile.
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you're
so
bloody
brilliant.
and this was so short but so . . .!!!
argh!! argh!!!!!!!
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awww...
thanky!
i called it bubbles, because you know how sometimes you get those little bubbles of air in some glass things? like they do it on purpose?
yeah well i was thinking that if i was going on the whole glass theme then they would be goosebumps
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all i can say is... wicked. i was curous to read what bubbles was about and now i say it is cool.
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well. well. cool lips because when you put cold things onto hot glass, it shatters... and so i kinda applied that to skin.. that if your skin is burning up, everything that touches it will be cooling.
and i guess, what i was going for is that even though i've built up so much resistance to something, one certain person can just go and reverse it all. -
If cool lips can do that to you, what can warm lips do? You made interesting word choices in this. You gave us the fragility of candy-glass yet, when it shatters, no one gets hurt. Layers upon layers...
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hahaha yeah we had the discussion of underlying meanings last night....some sort of sign? some sort of UNDERLYING MEANING? lol
yay for stupidity
love tami
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i so realised all the stuff it could mean after i wrote it. oh yeah for underlying meanings
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oh my oh my oh my
genious
beautiful
i love the way you showed fragility (though thats not even a word!!!)
love love love
tami
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yeah yeah yeah.... like that fake glass stuff they use in stunts for movies made outta sugar, and i once saw them make it on Y?. except it looked crap. but its still NEAT
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ooooooooOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
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"candy-glass".....sweet...
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