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Fleas On My Pillow

There are fleas on my pillow. Hello.
To the washer this pillow must go.
It was used by a human who upon it did sleep,
but I can't when it's me the fleas eat!  

Shack Cat
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Shack, you are a mess.
Always in distress.
It's a breeze
to get rid of those fleas!  

Just bring in the human  
If you want those fleas diminished.
In five minutes
your flea problem is finished!

Tiki Cat
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I'll still wash that pillow, though.

Shack Cat

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Written November 6th, 2005

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  • Rikkusaki
    November 9, 2005
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    nice rhyming, and interesting use of the letter form (or dialogue?) between two cats, appropriately signed at the bottom. Nice poem