don't do that
don't cut them out
such a huge mess right now
ain't it
i know you can't exactly stop
what happened
to being kids
don't want to
regret
anything later
so upset with
myself
don't know how much longer
i have
don't know
and she's gone
i shouldn't be talking about
this
you have bigger things on your mind
remember?
i know i know i know i know i know i know i know
it'll be okay, right?
right?
it has to be
right?
bittersweet or sweetbitter
...or bitterbitter
so many stories to tell you
but instead
i closed my eyes
killed today
i was
killed today
don't know
anything
and she's gone
Author notes
copy pasted lines from an AIM convo and added other stuff...
not a good night...
Written November 5th, 2005
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man this one's got my head spinning. novell idea for a writing style...rather interesting. the teazer line made me terribly curious to read the piece but unfortunately i think i'm leaving it more curious than when i began...no myseter solved, no story told...maybe another part to come? at any rate you've got me interested. peace
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beautiful
You are wise beyond your years. -
......omg.....i love you...and im sorry about last night....i should have been there.
Edited on Nov 06, 9:27 because ''. -
hon i love you...together, remember?
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