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some people

some ppl r so stupid and dont know when to stop cant say when there truly wrong 4 those ppl i feel pity 4 those ppl i cant help  some ppl just dont understand a life of happiness cause they cant let themself some ppl cry to themself those ppl r 2 far gone they dont care.some ppl dont ever learn some ppl dont grow up some ppl never change those ppl are out of are reach and it such a shame.


when you learn to give up you learn how 2 live

          i hope you know you kill me inside and out

                      im dead 2 u im sick of you im here 4 u i cry 4 u im your mistake so ill die 4 u


 Thoughts r there problem !!

         you've never kept me from
                                 f
                                  a
                                   l
                                    l
                                     i
                                      n
                                       g

If it does not end it will not begin (life)


im trapped in your hate  im trapped in my mind in this body i scar cuz i wish it was not mine



                 GO AWAY BEFORE YOU SEE ... BEFORE I MAKE YOU LEAVE BEFORE I MAKE MYSELF BLEED


                I DONT SEE MYSELF IN THE MIRROR I SEE SOME ONE I CAN NEVER BE !!





                      ~Anastasia Leah Moore~

Author notes

It is not a poem it is just idk but im not editting it u dont have to read it i just got bored and this is what i got sry im not editing it !!
~Asia~
Written November 5th, 2005

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  • SkinTight
    November 14, 2005
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    Hey asia. this is good. i kno its not a poem but it still has meaning. who cares about editing it. People who are critical are only insecure with themselves. remember that. well I loved the lil quotes. it has alot of deep meaning to think upon. great job and lylas ~Jamie~


  • Silent09
    November 9, 2005
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    thax u and it dont care how long it has been seens you commented me just that you did !!


  • SyntheticVagary
    November 9, 2005
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    that was almost in a dark way, like something you would write in your diary. I really liked it, I wrote a poem like that once. Too bad I lost it >.>. Well I know this is a WAY overdue comment considering you commented me ages ago, but you know how it can be...life gets hectic sometimes. I look forward to reading your work in the future. Thanks for the add too!
    -Angel

  • Lstjed
    November 7, 2005
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    Wow. Great write. Im sorry people have treated you this way! no one should ever have to be treated like this!


  • Silent09
    November 6, 2005
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    i love you allie im sry im not telling u things right now im not really telling any one but ill call you and try to explain.


  • MisJudged
    November 6, 2005
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    asia, i feel like i dont even know whats going on in your life right now. are you ok? i hope so. i love you!! i like your little sayings too!!
    Allie

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