My bestfriend is turning 18
I want to do something special for her
she has no clue what to do for her Birthday
only that she wants to have this Radical party
to maybe make new friends
I wish that we could
make her dreams come true
for she does deserve it so!!!!!
She has always been there for me
through thick and thin
I met her 6 years ago
weve been bestfriends since
I really want to do something special for her
She almost always understands me
and is always there for me
when I truly need her
someone so close
and theres nothin you can think of to do
special for them
when they deserve it most
to just do some thing
that would knock her socks off
just to make her never forget
that this birthday was the best
for she truly deserves it
My first gift would be
her long lost Boyfriend
which she also deserves
for she has been through many heart aches
the second would be something
so special she would never forget
I hope that we will always be bestfriends
for I am lucky to have her!!!
Dedicated to someone
very special to me
My Bestfriend
Sedusha S. B.
Love always
Kat
Author notes
"Happy 18th Birthday, Sedusha" Option 4
I hope that this is okay
if not don't worry I was just reading through it
and realized that it would fit your contest so yea
well love ya
good luck on the judging and have fun
by the way Happy Birthday
miss madem
bestfriends for life and always
kat
Written November 5th, 2005
A contest entry
- My 18th B-day Contest!!! by Touched by an Angel.
301 points, ended November 9, 2005, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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You are a true friend and I bet she loves having you as her friend. Hope she has an excellent time on her 18th..
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Very cute poem. I think it is sweet. I feel the same way about my best friend. Good luck in the contest and good luck in judging your's. Great poem. Love it.
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awsome
i love this poem. That was really sweet that you wanted to make her dream come true. I agree with Donna i hope whatever you got her she will never let go of it. Keep up the good wrigting and thanks for reading mine in your contest. God Bless! *Wynter* -
Beautiful!
A very beautiful poem with the love and thoughtfulness you have for your friend! It is always wonderful to have a good friend that we try to share everything from fun to laughter to sadness and other emotions that we can think about. To wish them the best is always a lovely thought. We want our friends to be happy and then we feel inside of us " happy"!
Beautiful write and good job!
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Kat,
Just to let you know best friend should be two words. A lovely thought for a poem and a lovely thought to want to do something special for your best friend. I hopw what ever you got her, she will always treasure. You don't friends that easily these days. A good write. Keep the ink flowing. Love and hugs...
~Donna~
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