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*A First Kiss*

An extraordinary moment,
You can never relieve,
A memory treasured forever.
A connection of mutual desire,
Maybe even like, or love.
Eyes locking,
Hands brushing,
Hearts pounding,
Lips touching,
Adrenaline rushing...
An EXPLOSION of emotion, excitement?
   FIREWORKS!

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Written November 5th, 2005

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  • LovyDovy
    November 9, 2005
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    It's very descriptive.
    Great write.
    -Celine


  • -Rosie-
    November 6, 2005
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    i applauded it again!

  • -Rosie-
    November 5, 2005
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    Oh my gosh priscilla you are an a roll! Great job!


  • Debbie Hansman
    November 5, 2005
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    You described so well...wonderful write!


  • Natasha Baudek
    November 5, 2005
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    i like this poem a whole lot!
    It is really really really really really really really nice!
    WOW! You must care a lot to write a poem like this!

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